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Author: mongoKart

source/quick-start.txt

@@ -20,8 +20,8 @@ Create a MongoDB Cluster
 
    .. step:: Set Up a Free Tier Cluster in Atlas
 
-      To set up your Atlas free cluster required for this Quick Start, complete the guidei
-      on :guides:`MongoDB Atlas Setup </atlas/account>`.
+      To set up your Atlas free cluster required for this Quick Start, complete the guide
+      :guides:`MongoDB Atlas Setup </atlas/account>` guide.
 
       After completing the steps in the Atlas guide, you have a new MongoDB
       cluster deployed in Atlas, a new database user, and
@@ -41,12 +41,13 @@ Create a MongoDB Cluster
 
      Save this file to a safe location for use in the next step.
 
-   .. step:: Set Your Connection String
+   .. step:: Add Your Connection String to an Environment Variable
 
       Run the following code in your shell to save the MongoDB connection string
       in your copy buffer from the previous step to an 
-      environment variable. This method is safer than including your credentials in your source 
-      code. 
+      environment variable. Storing your connection string in an
+      environment variable keeps your credentials separate from your source code. This
+      separation makes it less likely to expose your credentials when sharing your code.
 
    .. code-block:: bash
 
@@ -55,7 +56,7 @@ Create a MongoDB Cluster
    .. important::
 
       Make sure to replace the ``<username>`` and ``<password>`` sections of the connection 
-      string with the username and password of your Atlas user.
+      string with the username and password of your database user.
 
 Set Up Your Project
 -------------------
@@ -65,7 +66,7 @@ Set Up Your Project
 
    .. step:: Create the Project
 
-      Create a new directory and initialize your project with the ``dotnet new`` command,
+      Create a new directory and use the ``dotnet new`` command to initialize your project
       as follows:
 
       .. code-block:: shell
@@ -91,7 +92,7 @@ Query Your MongoDB Cluster from Your Application
 .. procedure::
    :style: connected
 
-   .. step:: Create the Code File
+   .. step:: Add the Sample Code
 
       Open the file named ``Program.cs`` in the base directory of your project. Copy the
       following sample code into ``Program.cs``: 
@@ -100,7 +101,7 @@ Query Your MongoDB Cluster from Your Application
          :language: csharp
          :dedent:
 
-   .. step:: Run an Atlas Query
+   .. step:: Query the Sample Data
 
       Run the following command in your shell. It should print the plot of the movie
       "Back to the Future" from the sample dataset: